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Monday, February 13, 2012

Cupid vs Cyberon Part 2


 Dupic turned to protect his brother from getting seared to death by the dragon, but his heel was grabbed by the monk that Cupid had just shot an arrow into. Instead of hitting him in the head, he had missed his target and plucked the weapon into his crotch. As the times that Dupic's ammo had not hit on target, the arrow stayed in the subject instead of vaporizing to thought. Treating the area as it would the mind, the arrow gave power to the monk's genital region. Ironically, this particular monk had been chosen to be written on the list due to his ardent adherence of  vows of chastity and silence. Those hard-lined promises ended once the tip of the fate arrow had entered his manhood. Now full of lust and desire, the monk's desire grew towards the fleeing cherub as he grabbed onto both of Dupic's boots after disrobing in a heartbeat.
                                                         
  Snared and frightened, Dupic resisted the monk's inhuman strength by attempting to flap his wings and fly away, but the pious pervert was too strong. Determined to reach Cupid, he drew from the reserves deep within his half-soul and dragged the now naked monk with him, closer to his hypnotized brother and Cyberon.

 Cupid came out of  his dazed stupor, just in time to see Dupic flying in what seemed like slow motion. When  his twin had attempted a backward dropkick he saw the bare assailant grasping Dupic's legs and pulling him towards the bulging spot with the arrow sticking out. Lunging from between Cyberon's eyes, Cupid's attention went to the rescue of his brother, and he flew that way.

 Cyberon  knew that this was his moment. Planning to hypnotize Cupid was a precursor to a larger plan, but in seeing these new developments, Cyberon figured out an appropriate punishment for these would-be assassins . He would separate them forever, and make man pay in the process.

  Dupic had struggled so much against getting violated, that he had run short of energy. As the monk pulled in one direction, Cyberon had closed in to pull the other with his teeth. With a well-placed chomp, Cyberon ended Dupic's life, and with it ,the last of the arrows.

 Cupid flew into a pure rage. Seeing his twin eaten by this majestic creature, he became so inflamed that his vision clouded over in shades of red. Red tears soaked the earth as swooped in and gutted the monk, who dropped both the arrow and his brother's still convulsing lower half.

 After spending what seemed like an eternity crying over his brother's corpse, he looked in vain for Cyberon. He would search those mountains for years. Only after that search turned up nothing, would Cupid try to wipe the arrow clean. He would then realize that the prophesy had been broken and that a new path would have to be set. The red from his angry tears would not come off the arrow. With no other ammo in stock, this arrow would have to do his job from now on.

 The next fifty billion people that Cupid would hit would be in the heart. His accuracy would rival that of the man-gods themselves when they'd hurl disasters upon the globe. He would search for Cyberon for centuries and not find him until he stumbled upon Noghin Nonagon. During that time, he'd cause humans to love and hate each other by shooting the very arrow that he had accidentally missed with right before his brother's demise. Each time it hits someone, a bit more intensity adds to the weapon. This is why there seems to be more urgency to love lives these days.All but the last single Dragon, that is. He hovered far below Noghin Nonagon, laughing at Cupid's latest attempt to find him.


34 comments:

  1. Wow, that is epic. Did you write it yourself?

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  2. An epic worthy of Gilgamesh. Poor Dupic. Alas, we all weep for thee. The "still convulsing" part was a nice detail. Also, "the Pious Pervert" is going to be my wrestling name from now on, so thank you for that.

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    1. You're welcome. If you need anymore, I'm full of them.

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    2. And thanks for the compliment.

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  3. Poor cupid, who knew a man with a diaper had gone through so much..lol....great write indeed. Epic is a nice word for it, very well done.

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    1. Thanks. I'll be doing the final showdown for the pair on next years V-day. It's got to be such an epic battle that it'll take that long to write it.

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  4. Why yes, I DID say "Oh my!" aloud at the sight of the monk attempting to rape Dupic.

    Hmmmmm, a very INTERESTING take on the Cupid mythos, that's for certain~! Keep it up man, I'm curious to see this "epic battle" you speak of~!

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    1. I kinda thought that would be a shocker, but to shock you? I'm shocked now, lol.

      Yeah, if you're still kicking it with me in a year, you'll get a taste of the showdown between Cupid and Cyberon.

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  5. Great story both sad and funny and made me laugh out loud....

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    1. Then it had it's desired effect. I'm glad to have entertained you.

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  6. I initially misread it as Cupid v Cylons. What a derp, great story anyway.

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    1. It's ok, I usually have 5 derp moments before breakfast. I'm glad the story has amused you.

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  7. This is seriously epic. It really is. I loved it and well done on writing something like this.

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    1. Thank you. I cannot ever remember anything being called 'epic' that only has so little in the way of dialogue. I have trouble in such areas, if you can tell.

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  8. if you're going for literotica I think I should introduce you to some other writers that might help you a bit... otherwise I don't know what you're getting at

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    1. It was an element to the story that a bit out of left field, but was not meant to stretch this fanciful legend into literotica.

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  9. Have you considered that the pious pervert, may also be a paedophile, considering that cupid and his twin brother (may he rest in peace) are/were babies?

    But seriously, this is amazing! Truly genius. I'm shit with stories :(

    GM x

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    1. And thank you for the 'genius' part. I humbly state that it may only be slightly gifted, but your lauds are very much appreciated.

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    2. Since the pious perv had no specific attraction to the cherub, I'd say no. He would have attempted to grind upon any near him, be it a man, woman, cherub, or goat.

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  10. cool design!

    http://underthefluorescents.blogspot.com/

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    1. Thank you. I haven't received a comment on that yet. I shall now look at what cool outfit you've put together.

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  11. Lol poor cupid!! Who knew cupid had such a history? haha

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  12. Wow! Thats an epic battle! Great story!

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  13. Quite an interesting read-fun take on Cupid but not so fun for his brother

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  14. I haven't found your Origins Blogfest entry yet, but this piece that you wrote is quite interesting and entertaining. I envy you in tackling a mystical fantasy story. I've tried in the past and the results were quite perplexing, but I truly did like this story.

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  15. I have no idea what you're talking about in this, But I like it! *thumbs up*

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